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Macy's Journey ( part 6 ) + survey of what you want more of

As Tyler cried Macy and Lilly struggled to keep him quiet. They ran into a nearby safe haven for animals. They all climbed over the gate and ran into the woods. Macy looked around and saw alot of wood from old past fallen trees and started to build a hut as Lilly calmed Tyler down. Nathan woke up to the sound of a old rusty semi and remembered what happend. He started wiggiling and got out of the sack to find himself with a bunch of pigs. He looked at them all, as if he was in a buffet, but he held himself back. He tried opening the back and failed in doing so. He now stood there wondering what to do. Just then he thought of somthing. He stood right in the middle of all the pigs and screamed as loud as he could. The truck driver heard this loud noise and pulled over. Nathan grabbed a tiny baby pig, ran over to the door, and waited. The mean, old, hairy truck driver opened the door to see what had happend. Then, Nathan jumped out onto the side of the road and ran into the highway. Avoiding oncoming cars he jumped and ran and made his way to the same sanctuary, climbed over the gate, and did all this STILL while holding the tiny, fragile, baby pig. As he ran into the forest he heard a loud noise, like sombody collecting wood. He walked nearer and nearer to the sound and saw Lilly, Tyler, and Macy. He slowly approached them making sure not to spook them and said, " What are you doing making a hut on the ground? It needs to be in the trees!". Macy heard his voice and ran to him checking to make sure he was okay, as did Lilly and Tyler. They soon saw a sleping baby pig in his arms. " I took it because it didn't desearve to be food.", he said looking at the cute baby girl pig. "What should we name it?", he asked. "Flower.", Macy said and everybody aggreed. Nathan set down the pigglet and made it a nice leave blanket and a leave bed. He put it to sleep and walked over to Macy looking into the streem with her. "What should I do?", she asked despretly,"Go back to my mother explaining what happend? Or keep missing her? If I tell her about you guys, she is bound to turn you in.". He took her hand in his, their eyes met, and they got close to one another. They suddenly kissed. Lilly watched from behind a tree while Tyler was busy playing with Punkin. Nathan looked at Macy and said, "Everything will be alright. Trust me. Just stick with us.". They sat down side by side next to the streem and caught little fish that swam by to eat that night.
To be continued....

Authors notes: Hey guys! Hope you are enjoying my story so far! I need your help though... take this vote and comment which you would like more!

1. I need more action
2. I need more romance
3. I need more adventure
4. I need more suspence
5. I need more death

 Thanks guys! - Lauren S. Baker, Reporter and author of Macy's Journey

 

I Think

I think it needs more romance, but other than that it is perfect.

Thank you for your input.....

Thank you for your input..... I am really happy you did! Smile

Your Welcome

Your Welcome Lauren

Its Great but...

I think it either needs suspence or romance... Hope I helped!!!