- About Us
Alright, like I said, I am going through and editing EVERYTHING. Here is the very beginning, before chapter one =) I just did all of this in under an hour, it is totally different than the original one. Tell me what you think, and if anything needs to be changed let me know.
I sat on the cotton sheets of the bed I had been provided. My shoulders hunched over as I watched my feet dangle about an inch above the floor.